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DW: I'm Sorry

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"I'm sorry," he whispered, just loud enough for her to hear. "I am so, so sorry."

Rose sniffed and turned away from the spot the TARDIS had disappeared, looking at the man beside her. Brown eyes met her, filled with a mix of both regret and happiness. "Why are you sorry?" she asked. "You didn't leave me here."

"But I knew it would happen," he admitted. "I knew it the moment we arrived. He… he just wants you to be happy, but I'd be a fool, if I pretended you could possibly be happy with me. I know you love him, that wonderful Time Lord, and I'm just part-human with no time and space to offer you, and…"

Rose smiled inwardly at his babbling. This was the final confirmation that this was really her Doctor. Her wonderful, gorgeous Doctor, right down to the really, really great hair. With no hesitation she lunged forward, pressing her lips to his in a kiss which was even more passionate as the one they had shared  moments ago (if that were possible).

This turned out to be a very, very effective way to shut him up, as he quickly started to kiss her back, his new wonderful human emotions making it feel even better. There were no restrictions now, no fear of watching her wither and die.

"Oi, you two!" Jackie's voice cut through their peaceful little bubble. "Shouldn't we get a move on? It's bloody cold here."

The Doctor broke the kiss and glared at her. "Actually, Blondie, I'm too busy to move, 'cause I'm snogging your daughter, which is something I have been wanting to do for four years. You got a problem with that?"

Rose laughed a little at this. Oh, this part-Doctor, part-Donna thing would certainly make things interesting around here. It seemed the Doctor had stunned Jackie into silence, something which did not happen often. Her mother shook her head slowly,  still in disbelief. The Doctor, the Time Lord one, would never, ever have said something like that.

"Good," he said and started to snog the love of his life again.

Oh yes, things would get really interesting.
An example of how easy something which was meant to be completely angsty turns to something more humorous. I kept the original title, though.

This is the result of me reading countless of stories where it take ages for the part-human Doctor and Rose to accept each other. I just wanted to write something where Rose accepts him and they can live happily ever after.

Well, this description is practically longer than the story. I regret nothing at all.

Please leave me a comment. I'll give you everything I own and Billie Piper, I swear! Well, except my Sonic Screwdriver pen, I'll die before I'm handing that one over!

EDIT: Wow, thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. I woke up and there was 35 messages in my inbox. Really, I'm blown away. :hug:
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I love how you did the part-donna part to show through the doctor part when he said, "Actually, Blondie, I'm too busy to move, 'cause I'm snogging your daughter, which is something I have been waiting to do for four years. You got a problem with that?"